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Click here"My love, we have all the Time in the World," said I.
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Norway_170521 days agoAuthor@ Hotstuff1P Oh, thank you! There are some parts that to myself, are a little poorly written, but a couple of ideas were good.
I often wonder if I should rewrite it by simplifying some parts and increasing the detail in others.
Norway_1705over 1 year agoAuthorNorway_17053 months agoAuthor
Thank you very much. I understand that cheating appeals to many people, but it does not appeal to me. I think that in the future I will often warn that there will be no cuckolding scenes, although sometimes it is possible that the characters will suspect that it happens (or talk about the possibility of it happening).
And I think I will often anticipate to readers that there will be no cuckolding, to avoid disappointing fans of that.
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I don't know if there will be a sequel. I'm very interested in Privateers (lawlessness, a morality to be invented) but I wouldn't know how to repeat the invitation to the Halloween Party.
Maybe I could put the characters in a film like Stagnetti Revenge... but by now the husband knows, and the wife knows that he knows.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI really happy that you put "no cuckolding or cheating" as I hate it. So the moment where Susan is dragged away with the chance of cheating. I would have stopped reading entirely if not for your warning. I do think though I would have enjoyed it a bit more if her husband actually got a bit angry. Otherwise I hope you make a part 2 cause this was amazing.
Norway_1705over 1 year agoAuthorThank you, Crystal_fan, too kind to an old man who is almost deaf and almost blind.
I know many readers are only looking for cuckoldry. I also know that many readers get indignant if a wife cheats on her husband.
I wanted to reassure -- on the dark scary night of Halloween -- the casual reader that nothing "horrible" or "bloody" would happen, despite appearances.
I apologize if I spoiled (some of) your fun.
You are absolutely right: I did make a mistake. I'm sorry.
Thank you for the constructive comment. I will try to be a better writer from here on .
