All Comments on 'Labor Day Road Trip Ch. 02'

Next chapter please.

Like the first two chapters. Really hope all the detail so far continues for many more chapters.

Thank you so much for the encouraging words! Working hard in the next chapter…

Another good chapter, another 5 stars. It is hard to believe that this is your first time writing. All the details, the slow burn but not distracting. will be waiting for the next chapter, can't wait to see what happens at dinner and out and about. Love the leash scene would love more on the leash. also loved how when not in scene Jenn's husband took control of the shower scene with "hands off the merchandise" it shows he's in when it is playtime.

Pappasleaze!