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All Comments on 'Lady X’s Party “The Milking”'

by MrOnifuta

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice premise.

A bit too sudden start to the milking. I'd have preferred a longer, slower buildup with some gentle cock teasing. That could have been accompanied by some dialog between Miss End and the audience explaining what she was doing, was going to do, and asking for suggestions/input from the audience.

Also possible would have been dialog between Miss End and the victim.

Altogether an enjoyable story.

Looking forward to next chapter.

Four stars.

missccslavemissccslaveabout 3 years ago

Would love to hear more. Hopefully a great start to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Loved it

5☆

FYI It's glove compartment 😁

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