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All Comments on 'Lainey's Love Story Pt. 01'

by Catcher78

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

lol this feels like a story book where a lot of random pages were torn out. What could have been a 3-5 paged lovely story is now an odd patchwork to piece together.

Could've been better. Get an editor to help you out.

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