All Comments on 'Lake Timberland Ch. 02'
by YouDareMe
- 21 Comments
YouDareMe7 months agoAuthorChapters 3 and 4 have both been submitted. Chapter 3 will be available for your viewing pleasure by morning. I will submit chapter 5 tomorrow afternoon. The following chapters are still a work in progress, but they're coming along nicely. I would like to give a big shout out to everyone for their kind comments of encouragement. Please keep voting 🙏😊
Anonymous7 months agoLOVED all of it, especially that texting bit. That was done perfectly. Five stars from me. Please keep this going!!
Anonymous7 months agoNaughtynurse121
Absolutely loved reading 1 & 2 however now gagging for part 3!!!, 5 stars
Kryan187 months agoAmazing work! One of my favorite stories when you first published it so I’m very happy to see it again. And love the changes you’ve made so far.
Anonymous7 months agoPart 1. was 5 stars, you rushed here and it is easy to tell (gave you 3 starts here). You were not rally building excitment and some things were to forced. Also I don't get the point with comparing his dick to his dads and say they are identical, then what's the point of fucking him.
You can do better but you were to eager to release a story instead of thinking about the built up like you were in part 1.
live4thebj7 months agoThis is torture. I wish you wrote the entire thing in one big submission. You would have probably made it to the top 10 rated stories if you did. Seems like only the long ones do. Either way 5 stars again.
midnightnightscrawler7 months agoA good story well told. I gave it 5 stars. Too many of the "naughty" moms on Literotica seem too formulaic and carboardy but the one you've created doesn't. One thing--I think you meant parallel not perpendicular for the dildo/penis comparison.
