All Comments on 'Lana's Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is Not romance

This is a cheating Sluts story . With a Scumbag brother as the villain. Good ending would be they get caught . He gets drawn and quarter. Head put on a spike . She's given to the Army to use as their scum slut .

rgraham666rgraham666almost 19 years ago
Well written

and extremely hot.

Such rich use of language. very nice.

It really deserves a full story written around it though.

Still, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
obviously romantic

according to my dictionary!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
obviously mis catagory

this is an obvious loving/cheating wives tale, not a romance

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