All Comments on 'Last Night'

Impact play is awesome! When safe of course. Short and sweet, although felt a bit rushed. But hey I'm greedy. Interesting different poin of view on cuckolding. I loved it. Maybe another chapter on her toys perspective? Thanks for sharing

The plot is not my style but I was intrigued and so I read it. Your writing made me struggle through disjointed sentences, grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. It made me lose interest about halfway through although I finished just to find out the ending.

The plot was a little over the top but if the writing is edited it should be more readable.