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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please for all our sanity EDIT before you submit. Barely into the story and we had to stop at the "small breast eyes". We skimmed the rest and found other mistakes as well. We don't fault you if English is not your first language but if it is please EDIT.

wet_lizziewet_lizzieover 1 year ago

Some stories make me feel less alone. That's one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story but agree with the editing comment; however please do write more, you have a wonderful and unique style!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

please proofread, not just spellcheck, proofread

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