by Gypsy in MI
Want more.I would want John to get more physical,with Laura.To test her more in S/M.To find she needs pain and abuse.In the office,Laura will suffer all indinities and beg for more,amazed at her addiction to to the most depraved of desires.You are a good writer,I want to read more of your work.
Wonderful story, well written brilliant climax, really got me going