All Comments on 'Laura - Falling Angel Pt. 01'

This is a great start, that has all the makings of a great series...sexy and new. Please continue!!..5Stars!...HOT!

Well written and very HOT!...I can't help but think that her self-corruption would be stimulated with a cocaine introduction, to help break her out of her shell...I smell a series!!

Really enticing opening for a series. Hope to see more soon.

A very nice start! I look forward to more!

Excellent start, this is a 'slow burner' (excuse the bad pun!) and will build to the kind of story we've come to expect from you. I can't wait to see what happens, soon I hope!

So far - so good

What this introduction needs now is a story

Well written, nice pace, hopefully a sequel will follow soon.

Very nicely done….)