All Comments on 'Laura's Femdom Empowerment Ch. 01'

This is all sooo true. This chapter was well written, believable and left me looking forward to Chapter 2. I enjoy stories that mimic real life more than the many that seem to go far beyond reality in order to provoke interest. I hope that yours will stay real as Laura becomes empowered.

I am the author of Laura’s Femdom Empowerment. I appreciate your comments. I have tried to keep my story believable. I have already submitted all seven chapters of this story and I’m beginning work on the next series. I hope the remaining chapters are published soon. I hear you about believability. I’m trying to walk the line between believeability and an exciting story. I will tell you that to the story gets much better as it goes on.

Excellent!

I relate very much to your experiences regarding being empowered through the use of feminine sexual enticement. I too am a writer and a self-confessed cock tease; reading your backstory is very much like my own. Thanks for your efforts!

Good premise.

But that's all.

Four stars.