by Long2bLocked
Thank you for a great story.
Having 'built us up' so well in the first two pages, the third came as a disappointing let-down - shame!
I also wish it ended better with Jared but thanks for sharing either way!
Just for the record Laura is far from done. There are seven chapters in all. They are already submitted. Literotica publishes them gradually.
I like the story very much, but the (abrupt) end with Jared is not to my liking
Just a note to all. It seems that some readers don’t realize when they are reading a chapter of a story or one part of a multipart story. All the comments for this chapter seem to imply that it’s the last chapter but it’s not. For example this is Chapter 3 of a 7 chapter series. Even more, the story continues in an entirely different series. It pays to check out each author’s profile. That’s where you can find all their published stories. In addition, in my mine, I have a guide to my stories to help readers learn what stories are related and what ones are independent.