by Long2bLocked
It's a great story, the way it developments, points out the characters and of course Laura. Thanks for the great story and please keep on writing!
Now this evolving is perfect for the story. You’re giving a great description of the situation. Maybe Jarred could appear again as a slave once the dungeon is ready...
Loving this series! So real and well thought out, 5 all day!!
This story is going great!
The pace is just right and addition slowly builds!
Why don't you turn the guy into her FULL 24/7 SLAVE (It would be amazing).
OMG that was hot. I’m trying to visualize if I’d do anything different from Ben and run away. Nope, I’d be frozen in anticipation just like Ben. Great job!