All Comments on 'Lauren, Eleven'

Good chapter!

5

Ok. I get what you're doing now. Just moving on, ignoring comments and suggestions you don't like, telling your story? ramblings? meanderings? in your own damn good time, your own way, and to hell with those who don't care for it. I'm not the only reader who has mentioned disliking the short, choppy tidbits you post daily. If I wanted to read a blog, I wouldn't be on this site. So I'll deal with it my way andwait till you've posted everything you're going to dribble out about Lauren and read them all together. If I care enough to check back. 1 star for ignoring your readers.

Good chapter (or slice) in a great story.

And -5 stars to LitCrit below for being unusually annoying 😊

LitCrit's observations are interesting. Aside from this story, I take each one as a stand alone vignette not necessarily related to any of the others. This one seems to beg for a follow up. But, that is me.

Good man! He put Whitehouse on notice. Otherwise not much happening, 4 stars.