All Comments on 'Lauren, Two'

Excellent - you have me hooked

Nothing better than good Italian food!

5

I'm hoping that this is the start of a longer story.

What started out as a wonderful telling of the beginning of a relationship, took a nose dive at the end. If there is going to be a continuation of this story, there should have been a hook at the end. Not the dead fish that left nothing to contemplate. I was looking forward to a 5 star story, even if it was a multi-part story. But the nothing ending just earned 3 stars,

Fine writing always leaves the reader wanting more. THIS story is fine writing!

As others have already said this chapter left me feeling a bit flat with nothing seemingly added to the story. Has it made me look forward to another chapter, at this point, no not really.

Not sure why we should read a story with a deader than dead end. And what the heck is a tartuto? Some research/carefulness is required.

Lauren is a gal who appreciates fine cars and good food and knows how to signal the end of a first and only date. What a woman for somebody! Thanks for writing a romance that dares end by being a romance that might have been. 5 stars.

Love the story - and the way it's developing.