by roseyfingers
Thank you for a well written compelling tale. A joy to read.
I was looking forward to her kicking everyone's ass, but I guess you can't always get what you want...
Really enjoyed this story, I don't understand why some reviewers get so upset about certain implausible aspects of the plot. This is fantasy not history. The kidnapping and enslavement of powerful women is more erotic.
Too much realism can be a right turn off. I enjoy the fantasy because I know it is that.
this should be on streaming platforms, minus all the fuckings, I strongly urge you to submit a pilot for this, or sell the production rights on literotica's
Anonymous 5-5-23 - thank you for the complement. I probably should try writing something that could be used outside the erotic websites and in my own name, but I have no idea how to write such a thing or submit such a pilot. But thanks again.
Good ending sadly, not enough people who took place in all this. Got what they deserved, especially the governor.