All Comments on 'Lay Back, Relax'

... is a transitive verb. If you meant to say lie, you should have written it. Three.

Welcome to Lit and thanks for posting your story. It's always pleasing to find a well-written, erotic story from a new (to Lit) author. I am curious if you plan to continue this, because you've teased the reader as much as "I" in the fantasy.

Commenting on anon's rather cold comment about "lay." Since you are writing in present tense, the correct usage is "lie." If you had written in past tense, it would be "lay." Your fantasy lover can get away with speaking "Lay back and relax..." because most people when speaking wrongly use "lay" when they mean "lie", so this is not necessarily a problem.

Looking forward to your next post.