by KingRicky
I had to chuckle at the "grabbed a bear off the bar".
A very good story and an enjoyable read.
While there wasn't really any romance he did have the girl of his dreams.
The sex was good, no monster cock!!!!
A few minor errors but nothing that can't be overlooked.
Hope there will be a chapter two as it seems you left an opening for it.
Amazing story and you capitalized on every girls fantasy getting it on with a musicain they are the panty droppers of america after all so this story was super hot plus the guy was a giver thats hard to find keep writing I can't wait to read more
Overall, a good story... Not too much romance and quite a few punctual and grammatical errors, but it can be overlooked. A wonderful read!
I really wanted to like this story. They're, there, and their. Look up how to use them and when. Ugh!
If all they can do is complain about a few grammatical errors.
Then, you sir, are one hell of a story teller!
I loved this piece. I hope you do more.
5 stars.