All Comments on 'Lazy Daze'

If all they can do is complain about a few grammatical errors.

Then, you sir, are one hell of a story teller!

I loved this piece. I hope you do more.

5 stars.

I really wanted to like this story. They're, there, and their. Look up how to use them and when. Ugh!

but laced an ending, had more of a stop than an end.

by a wanker

Overall, a good story... Not too much romance and quite a few punctual and grammatical errors, but it can be overlooked. A wonderful read!

Amazing story and you capitalized on every girls fantasy getting it on with a musicain they are the panty droppers of america after all so this story was super hot plus the guy was a giver thats hard to find keep writing I can't wait to read more

Very good. Keep on writing !!

A very good story and an enjoyable read.

While there wasn't really any romance he did have the girl of his dreams.

The sex was good, no monster cock!!!!

A few minor errors but nothing that can't be overlooked.

Hope there will be a chapter two as it seems you left an opening for it.

I had to chuckle at the "grabbed a bear off the bar".