All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 04'

This story keeps getting better and better. I can't help but think what a great book this would make

Quite teasing! I LOVE this story but I hate it when it has to end! I CAN NOT WAIT till the next installment!

I can't wait for Cullen and Aislinn to get together!!

good plot and character development here. Thanks for putting in so much time to get your chapters out regularly

This is amazing... I am ... blown away. This is one of the best stories i've read, here on literotica or otherwise. Usually I come here for a quick stroke story, but I can't put this down. I don't think I've cared as much the the characters or been drawn into the story by any other fiction that I've read in the past few years as much as this. The attraction between Aislinn and Cullen is so powerful and the story so riveting and moving-- I can't wait to see what happens next! Again, this is simply amazing! Well Done! :D

I'm hooked up.

Wow....a very silky and unexpected transition....wondered how he was going to escape the ceremony....liked it.

Because I know what's coming, having read the story before, I can see the foreshadowing. Artfully done!

I am hooked too

To leave this story,it this a bk I was holding I wouldn't be able to out away its to damn good!

though i wish that the chapters were longer this is an amazing story and i cant wait to get to the next chapter.the storyline is put together with efficiency, professionalism,and is very entertaining.i hope you continue to write and think you should consider writing books and having them published.great job and i look forward to seeing many more amazing stories

I am reading this again for the second time in two days...Loving it!!!

I am reading this again for the second time in two days...Loving it!!!

Ohhh this story is so good!

Best chapter so far. It is getting more interesting!

Getting interesting! Would write more but I'm in a hurry to read the next chapter!!! :D

From now on, Aislinn looks like Phoebe from Charmed in my mind ;)