by monkeykinglives
Good job on this one. I enjoyed the insights into the sub’s mindset—and the lobby scene was particularly well written. This one was a little light on sex, but I based on your profile I understand that you’re building up to a grand finale of sorts? Look forward to reading the rest of this series and whatever is next.
I always wonder about how much to leave in, and how much to leave out. I'll keep adjusting the balance as I learn.
Yes, I'm trying to construct a classic story arc.
I submitted all the chapters at once, hoping they would all publish on the same day so readers didn't have to wait. Lit, wisely, has a different plan - one per day per author.
Having a woman with subby tendencies, I would love to practice restraints with her. But she isn't too keen on the idea due to past abuses. I have thus been searching for ways to have what I want from her without violating hard boundaries.
I've discovered the Gorean practice of "Bound By My Will", and I think she might be willing to try that. But I never thought about the "Thumbs" technique you present in this tale. I'll have to give that one a try.
So far, with each chapter, I've learned something I can use in my own life. I thank you.
Looking forward to the subsequent chapters.