All Comments on 'Learning the Ropes Ch. 02'

Pretty good story, but my question now becomes are you going to bring someone like Deja back, or is she just one of the countless characters you bring in for 1 story that has a ton of potential to make multiple appearances that just gets tossed aside? I certainly hope not. Also, when were Simeon and Denise born? Is Kyle their father? Seems there's more and more random members of that family but it's impossible to tell who's who anymore. Try to stay consistent for once!!!!!!!!!!

Too many characters makes this story hard to read and pretty ridiculous. This story lost its point and taking away from the 2 people who you want to see fuck. By the time he fucks her I won't be interested. It's like you are trying to start over the their story but it makes no sense. Sally already wad gonna fuck him and she are pussy in front of him already. So pt 2 is like what?

This story is off to an absolutely amazing start, I love the combined open horniness and tension between the two main characters, and them being plopped down into a situation with mandatory nudity and free sex is awesome, Its a huge fetish of mine that I can't get enough of. And despite what other commenters said, I think the number of characters is great, and just makes it hotter! I look forward to reading a lot more and will check out all of your stories.