All Comments on 'Learning to be a Sub: Lesson #1'

Oh this is delicious. The toilet paper bondage, the point about contrast, the "who's keeping you here?" I'm taking notes.

Great opening chapter full of detail and delicious description of the interaction between the teacher and student (or Domme and sub).

I loved how you brought out what it meant to be involved with BDSM; not as a punishment but as a holder of control or a consensual relinquisher of control - an excellent way of looking at the subject.

Hope Ch2 isn’t far behind

This is delicious. So, so hot.

Again, a masterpiece! genz, you are a brilliant writer! That was so erotic, so beautiful. I'm not into BDSM, but this soft version of control was so stimulating, so sensual. 5 stars and would be 10 if I were able! Fantastic!!!

I don’t know how you did it, but you did. You made a BDSM story tender. This beats several stories in the Valentines Day contest.

Amazingly hot, creative story that flowed perfectly. I don’t know much about BDSM, but your careful, deliberate language in your stories is not only hella hot but sweet and full of sexy consent. It makes me want more. Great job on this one I wouldn’t mind if this was a one shot, it was THAT good!

Fantastic start looking forward to the development and subsequent chapters

Awesome! nothing else needs to be said. 5 stars

I thought that was beautifully written, focussing on the mind and allowing the story to grow

So good to read a bdsm based story by someone who understands. And doesn't have to whip or chain up what becomes the victim in the first page. And no need for the usual foul language and derogatory name calling

Plus your story telling is calm but exhilarating

Thank you. Best read for ages

Your writing is just amazing! I am totally enjoying your stories!

Very well written. Love the reasoning on why she wanted to be there

I never expected the last scene, very well done

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Simply amazing. I would truly like to read Lesson #2, Lesson #3, etc.

I love this story with the warm, tender domme. It's your best work.

Will there be a part 2?

OMG! I want to be a lesbian and also into BDSM