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amyMacover 1 year agoGood story, very good potential. I think it would be extra ice, with a couple of additions.
Make the team, the wolves, the bulldogs, or the wolfhounds, and have him service the mascot as perhaps after or before a championship game. Next it would be Great if the Coach had a sluty trophy wife, who takes on all cumers, then he could learn the joy of eating really large cream pies. But those are my interests, perhaps not yours. If the site allows dogs, I'd be happy to give you some assistance with real technics.
Thank you for sharing your talents with us, I know authors don't hear that as often as they should.
amy, a writer elsewhere
Anonymousover 1 year agoI wish it was that easy to find someone to make a cocksucking cum slut like jay lucky guy
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoLove this story, all of it! I'd love for the coach to make this cocksucker deep throat both teams after a game!
putmeonmykneesalmost 2 years agoAuthorThank you both for the great feedback. I'm still learning the ropes when it comes to writing erotica so it means a lot when I hear back from someone who has read my story. Tristantrotsky, thank you for the wonderful insights. As always, you are spot on and I've learned a lot from reading your stories. OSUfan130, I love your positive feedback on my stories so I'll keep them coming! I have at least another chapter or two involving Jay and his cocksucking adventures so stay tuned for more.
