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I wasn't planning on this going beyond two parts, but the story isn't over in my mind and I'm gonna go with it. There's more to write about.
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Anonymous5 months agoAfter making my 1st comment earlier I scanned a few made by others
I have no problem with uncorrected typos, spelling n grammar mistakes imho they can convey the level of passion n involvement u hav in getting the story down its ur story u can tell it the way u want sure maybe conforming to norms may get u more readers dunno maybe lose some we like to express our selves as individuals esp in a subject as intimate
GaiusPetroniusalmost 2 years ago5 stars.
BUT one point of constructive criticism: Errors in grammar and usage are blemishes you owe it to yourself to avoid. Please learn the difference between "lie" and "lay" and between "rise" and "raise." "Lie" (past tense "lay" and past participle "lain") and "rise" (past tense "rose" and past participle "risen") are intransitive verbs. "Lay" (past tense "laid" and past participle "laid") and "raise" (past tense "raised" and past participle "raised") are transitive verbs. Spend a few minutes on Google or Bing to learn the difference.
