All Comments on 'Leeann's Ordeal'

Sorry but this was not very good. Plot sucked and ending seemed rushed. You really could have done so much better with a little imagination

This was a great story about the wifes submision and the helpless husband watching.

Some nice ideas but it reads like a plot outline rather than a story. Slow down, turn each paragraph into its own chapter.

... I wouldn't mind if it was a bit more... elaborated, so to say.

Good plot, anyways :-)