All Comments on 'Lee's Birthday'

Excellent story.

I would like to suggest though that instead of saying "inside of me" "inside me" is better.

You normally wouldn't say "come inside of my house", would you? wouldn't just say "come in"?

But please don't let this comment detract from an excellent story.

Very well written!

Love the passionate character development and their chemistry.

Highly erotic and intimate, exhibiting the primal needs and lusty desires.

Love the medical subtext, too.

Great sexy story!

Write more!