by Jamie_in_dresses
Nice story! Also, I don't think I have heard of "petal" used as an element anywhere else.
Nice premise.
But sex starts too abruptly. And moves ahead much too quickly.
Needed more dialog during sex scenes.
Needed her to give instructions/directions of the specific things she wanted him to do to/for her.
Four stars.
Definitely a solid start, the sex could be more descriptive and include more dialogue. I'd love a part 2 in order to see how it progresses. Thanks for sharing!
Utterly Delicious tale I loved reading every single word that have shared with us all . Oh how I wished you have found the time to indulge me with a second instalment.. Thank you all the same xxx
It's too bad you seem to have quit writing -- this is your best story yet. Believable characters and plot, which is not a given on Literotica. Would love to read the sequel!
Well done but don't understand her motivations... She just cheated on her husband and the only "issue" she cited was that their relationship is vanilla. Apparently, she's arrived by the idea, but give us more of what's going on...