by LuvYouInStockings
I like it! When I read the first story I didn't think it would be any good. but I'm glad I gave the series another chance and continued to read.
While I like the women/ooze creatures sucking the men they have sex with dry, I'd like to see a bit more...um...death. Some kind of thing where the ooze possessed women kill the guys they have sex with or the ooze eventually consumes them.
Of course this is more something I'd personally like to see and my own fetish. You can do whatever you'd like with your stories. Its not a big deal. Either way good story.
Love the story, hitting all the things I love: the non human mind control, horror, intense arousal. Would love to see Melissa too.