by Arking
A delightdul tale, good storyline with great characterization. A mixture of characters that you would be proud to call friends in real life. Five well deserved stars and I hope that we get to learn more of Sonny (AKA Claudette) and Pixie in future episodes.
I have liked your previous stories but this is the best, good characterization and a very interesting story, as another has said glad there is more
Thank you everyone. [Spoiler Alert] Yes there is a LONG way to go for all of our characters plus a new one about to be introduced as well. Your kind words keep me going.
WAR WHAT IS HE GOOD FOR, ABSOLUTELY NOTHING SAY IT AGAIN WAR !!! ??? Why the Hell !!!???
The only outcome hatred . Pure suffering and deaths …. And an ending, nope as it is the best business humans founded
This chapter took me by my heart ….. so so sensual so beautiful so full of feelings emotion’s heartbeats , just extraordinary enchanting
Your talent is ART ….. thank you for sharing this talent
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@Franziska - Thank you my dear friend. [You do know that that song now is embedded into my brain] Your kind words inspire me.
Sometimes you read a series, knowing what the author is capable of. The first part is nice, the second okay, and then the third part sweeps you of your feet. That's what happened to me here, I'm all smiles and an occasional tear. Beautiful, thank you!
@Cindy - I am always looking forward to your comments. I always try to meet the expectations others have of my writing.
You write so beautifully, the story flows flawlessly. As a native Swahili speaker, I'm impressed. if i was to learn french, part 1 and 2 of this story would be my top choice. If you would please help this clueless gay girl (broken gay dar)know how to pick out gay femme women like Suzanne (part 2) was taught, I'd be grateful. Shukran.
Had to check and after months i had to reread this to get the dots for the coming parts ….. this is soooo lovely, so innocent so sweet so caring just marvelous ….. extraordinary writing Bobbi well done , 💝🌸