by clintorres
Loved the variations of sex play throughout, seems everyone "came" away satisfied, including me!
Good to see the familiarity grow between the two lovers over parts one and two. Leslie sounds like a fun, adventurous lady who knows what she wants and gives as good as she gets. Too bad this didn't occur over the previous July 4th holiday, Leslie sounds like a real firecracker!
So well-written, Leslie is much more of a romance story than an erotic couplings story, thanks to the tender love and sweet nature of the relationship throughout. The descriptive sex in itself is not the determining factor; rather, it is how such material is handled that is important, and the author does so in this story with great feeling and compassion, and in a way that is very loving and never crude. The result is a superior romantic story fully deserving of a five star rating.