by Myanlass
Guess I have to wait for Gale's story, but I love this one too. Can't wait to read more.
The grammer was getting me though love. I absolutely love that you put a story up, all those other triflin writers just leave us hanging. Thank you and have a happy new year.
I've been waiting for Dominique's story and finally it's here! Yay! Cant wait to see where this heads, keep posting, dont keep us waiting to long please!
Wheover the writer of that comment was cannot spell, so why criticise grammar?
But I do have to agree that the grammatical errors and the tense changes were really distracting. I love that you're giving us a story that we can really sink our teeth into, but have someone else read over it or something before you post. I want to get into it, not be dragged out by minor errors.
I really like this story, but it's true that a little editing could turn very good into superior. You're very talented, Myanlass.
I love how this is starting and it looks like its going to be a long ride for Dom and Nik.
i do beleive the line "hang on its going to be a bumpy night" comes to mind
I'm liking that Dominique is now in the mix. I can't wait to see how you unfold this story! Like others said before me, a little more editing can make this good story a great one. "PhD in Pediatrician"....come on lady!
Keep going pleaseeee! Who cares about the Grammer right noone can deny the story is addictive.
and like someone else said you don't leave us hanging for too long. However, this is the first time that it's REALLY gotten to me. The errors grammatical and otherwise - tense changes, missing words - are making this so hard going when all I want to do is sink into the story.
It's time to get an editor!
Where's the rest. I'm loving it already, and this is just the first chapter.
Want more please.
I've read so many romance stories that it's almost impossible for me to not know how things go. Color me shocked that Jason was engaged. I just knew he'd be gay lol.
I already love the story though.
This story is amazing. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
is my next chapter ?!?!? come on girl its the 1st already i need my fix lol ;)
don't keep us waiting too long!!...i have high expectations for this story, i can hardly wait!!!
It keeps getting worse and worse for her, now he wants her to plan his wedding...WTF? How insensitive of her friend. She needs to tell him and Candi hell no. Thanks
This whole series is awesome. You shouldn't even be on this site with this story. You should make it a book & publish it. It IS that good. Made me lose focus of why I was on this site in the first place!
haha, love this! just in the nick of time Nik! i'm so glad she's not being a vindictive bitch about this
if it wasnt completed id recommend dom jumping her mothers ass. sounds like she has done everything else to try to get her mothers attention. i mean bring up all of her mothers short comings and if she brings up the mother bit, dom tells her she has never been a mother to her,just the bitch that gave birth to her. i mean what can happen? she doesnt have a relationship with her anyway. apparently mom prolly feeling regret for cheating on husband and pissed off at her dad for leaving. while taking it all out on dom like its her fault. only time will tell if im right, i hope i am. lol
You had me at "this isn't some freaky sex story where I gullibly agree." LOVE it!!!
Lol I can imagine the look on her face when he showed up. Bet it was priceless, Nik is going to have a good time with this arrangement
OH MY GHOSH U R 1 OV MY FAV AUTHORS ON HERE PLZ KEEP WRITTING I LOVE UR STORIES THEY R THE BEST CONTINUE PLZ .... THEY R THAT GOOD
the one thing about this author is she loves to giver her female charaters high credentials without bothering with the logistics. The was the ivy league chef (because what ivy league school doesnt have a culinary program?! hint: none of them). Now this new girl who managed to get a phd and a master. 6+4+ the year she took off to do volunteer work, yet she is still supposed to be super young. not a big deal i like reading these stories but that always makes me laugh.
I just dont understand why some people (Anonymous below ) are always so picky about every single detail in the stories ..Do you people understand this is a fantasy story. WTF