All Comments on 'Letting My Friend Impregnate Me'

Decent premise.

But all the sex is just so automatic that it's just boring.

Among other things, it needs lots more dialog before his cock enters her pussy.

Do you like how my pussy looks? Is this what you imagined it'd look like? I shaved it for you just this morning, would you like to feel how smooth it is? How wet I am for you? Are you hard? Show me how hard you are. Do you ever masturbate thinking about me? Show me. Does it feel good? Would you like to touch me? Where? How?

And so on.

Three stars.

so fucking beautiful and erotic

Very hot, great first story.

Very well done for a first story.

Hope she shows a baby bump in a few months.

Not only is this well articulated, but, this small excerpt is way beyond the bland depiction of porn through words. The effort that the writer has made here to portray this encounter in the 1st Person Narrative style is highly appreciated as well. Looking forward to the Second Part.

i love creampies

This sounds like it was made using Chat GPT, wayyy too robotic and unnatural dialogue

Sequels/ new content coming? Good first outing!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Creampies are heavenly when a lady is fertile and ripe for seeding

Another young lady like yourself had me. I did the same for her. Lovely story the way you told it. Easily 5 (6) stars.

Part 2! Let's see it!

Does she expect him to help raise the baby?

another of the literally thousand or so authors on Liter that have no idea about female anatomy, or that a cervix is NOT where they think it is.

Very nice hope there is a part 2.