All Comments on 'Lexi's Fool'

Sorry, this was a good story wasted by the simplistic, almost brutish way it was told. You may have been pissed off but no need to be pissed at us.

Great potential here but the climax feels rushed. I liked your idea and where you were taking it but a little slower in the progression and the end result would have been better. Also, Lexi's character didn't really go anywhere, especially during the end event. Try focusing on both characters a little more equally next time.

I enjoyed this so keep up the good work, write another chapter and keep the stuff rolling and you'll get there.

Thank you for your feedback as I'm always striving to make your reading experience more pleasurable.

I would like to see you revisit this story and, lengthen it I guess would be a good suggestion. The plot is good and could be fun to read with more development.

As per EosAurora's suggestion, this story has been fleshed out into a book entitled, "LOLA AND REX' by R.C. Daniels, available on Kindle and FREE on KU! Thanks for reading!

I think Lexi has paid her pennance, for now. Finn your no longer the stunt cock what do have in mind ? How were the ratings