All Comments on 'Liberty's Adventures Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow!

That was intense! Great work! :D

I am so curious about the accomplice, and the redhead (I don't want to spoil her name, in case readers didn't read the chapter yet).

I hope there will be more. :)

LibertyMarshmellow98LibertyMarshmellow98about 6 years agoAuthor
More to come :)

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and thank you very much for commenting. I appreciate the feedback immensely as this chapter is a bit more intense than my first one and I was unsure about how it would be received.

I have planned out the next few chapters so definitely more to come. I finished this chapter while in Italy (because I couldn't hold myself back) but I'll probably be putting writing in hold (outside of poetry) until I've finished here. When I get back to England in a week I'll be able to write more. :)

I plan to further the roles of both the accomplice and the redhead in later chapters so don't worry. Both are reaccuring characters (Although we may have to wait a little while to reunite with our firey haired friend.)

I'm hoping on adding to my poetry and other unrelated stories alongside this story so stay tuned.

Keep up to date with my work by following me #shamelessplug :P

Thanks again,

Liberty

woodworkerdomwoodworkerdomalmost 6 years ago
Very arousing

This was very hot but it seemed rushed. I offer you the same recommendation as you gave me. Can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
DAMN

I'm loving every part of this--from the close and personal writing style to the fantastic imagery that's now flooding my mind. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep doing what you're doing, my sweet. We're all waiting for it xoxo

-A

LibertyMarshmellow98LibertyMarshmellow98almost 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you very much :) New chapter should be on its way soon as I am finally finished with exams and able to write more. This time Liberty will be having some fun on her own at home.

Don't worry those of you into exhibitionism, we will be back to that soon. I just wanted to mix it up a little. In other news progress on some standalone stories has resumed so expect a little bit of diversity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Please don’t stop..

Loving the level of detail you are putting in.. Liberty’s thoughts and feelings deep within her. It’s intense and inspiring. Also love the mystery and wondering where it might go next! Thank you. X

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