All Comments on 'Life after Lockdown'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hated the swap

sp9983sp9983almost 2 years ago

Storyline is nonexistent, you jumped from Thomas being back,from where who knows, to him worrying a new guy, suggesting a client. Then you add another character making stockings. It just made no sense at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

YOU need some direction> too many people, not enough character fill. get help writing or give it up !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Absolutely shit. No substance at all confusion and undeveloped.

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Worked in Africa which are the background for some stories, nearly every sex scene is true or based very closely to actual events.