All Comments on 'Life Model'

This story had so much potential but a horrible read constant unnecessary use of the word “like” etc felt like I was reading a story written by a east London chav

I really enjoyed this one! Sexy, funny and cute, and with a surprise, ahem, happy ending. I liked the shifting POV and the use of vernacular too...it gave the story a real sense of personality. 👏👏👏👏👏 5 Stars!

Stop using "I mean" and like. I made it through just a paragraph or two before I quit.

Just to comment that the story is written in the first person and that is why parts of it sounds like it is written by a chav! The character writing that part uses that sort of language. The frequent use of ‘like’ is quite deliberate to give this effect.

"Even if it means being stripped stark naked and wanked in public."

This has been a long time fantasy of mine. I loved this story!