All Comments on 'Life of a Slave boy Ch. 01'

I love the way you write! I'm new into the Fm stories and i normally read and write Mf, but I really do love this side of a dynamic!

The characters you describe really well and it's fun to get to know them a little bit. Good job!

I didn't enjoy giving your story only 2 stars, but as a stand-alone piece, it was boring and lacked any real action. If you intend to continue the story, which I hope you do because the writing was solid, you should have posted a longer Ch. 1 that had some action in it or posted a couple of chapters at the same time.

Excellent. Just how a young slave would be treated.