All Comments on 'Lifestyle Ch. 06: Finding Issues'

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Stubbyone 11 months ago

Hmmmm . I like the overall story, but thing seem to progress way too rapidly. Have a drink, suck my cock. Really ? There should be more emotion from him watching Jan break the rules willy nilly ! She makes the rules then ignores them as the mood hits her. Very disrespectful ! The story should have had more emotion and slower build up to sharing scenes.

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I've enjoyed writing for my own benefit in the past. Being a geek in my previous careers, learning to write a good story is now a challenge for my spare time. I'm an older male interested in the Loving Wives category, with those stories involving consensual sharing. I don't...

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