by Lifestyle66
Outstanding storytelling and great storyline. Wonderfully enjoyable read. You do such a great job with the writing and letting your readers know what the characters are thinking and their ups and downs in their emotions. You have a wide range of characters that a lot of your fans can relate to or have known people very similar in their nature and roller coaster range of feelings. Both good and bad feelings. So thank you for your efforts and time to produce such a fun and enjoyable read. Cheers
1* - because the sex club purposely separated Steve and Allison for their own purposes. Gary should be mugged by Steve sometime in the future.
Thank you, Anonymous for the 1, followed by your specific reasoning as to why. That's constructive feedback, and thus a 1 well deserved!
I am enjoying your stories. Very well written. I am looking forward to chapter 10.
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