by DrFemme
Like everything about this scenario: the simmering tension around karaoke, the seductive sex scene just what she hoped for and more, and the closing lines “Next time…. Deal.” So perfect. Felt the sex scene could have been more intense, more seductive if lines shortened/clipped a bit more to match the sex; maybe bit more dialogue. Not suggesting screaming debauchery rather ramping up/building the intensity to the climaxes she experienced. Look forward to more from your imagination; even more between Hypatia and her anonymous lover.