by BrazenHorse
I love this story and look forward to each release, but I wish you moved a little bit further than handjobs.
Enjoying this series hopefully things will move on with Ryan and Nicole they seem to be emotionally closer than ordinary siblings. Although I would prefer if Jules didn't get involved in their developing relationship it seems that both Ryan and Nicole regard her as almost a second sister so maybe it wouldn't be to bad if she was involved in a threesome with Ryan and Nicole.
Keep developing their relationship as that is clearly a focal point for them. 5*
It's about time Nicole puts her lips and tongue to work on Ryan's cock -- and about time Ryan is totally stripped of clothes so that Nicole can caress his chest too. Maybe she can hang on long enough to suck the cum out of Ryan's cock as he explodes his man cream into her throat! And given Ryan's maturity, I'd expect some dark chest hair splashed across his upper chest, perhaps a treasure trail across his abs, and certainly a cock bush. Let's make him a real man!
This seems like the first real stumble in the series. The opening scene was not sexy, seemed pointless, and contradicted the earlier impression of their relationship. Skipping it would have made this chapter stronger.
"Making something?" Ryan joked as he fiddled with his nearly hardened cock. Nicole glanced at his cock and laughed. "Cock soup."
How about 'cockalekie soup'?
Continues to develop as a nice story...BUT, these girls have to get naked and start sharing their own "charms" with Ryan...AND I DONOT MEAN IN A PASSIVE MANNER!!!! It is time for some down-and-dirty swapping of bodily fluid, with the girls getting their poor little cunnies stretched wide-and-deep by Ryan's horse dick!!
Stop Messing Around, move it along!!
Still, Five**5**Stars...yyyyaaaayyyy!!!!