by THIRDCOAST
I didn't care for the ending. It seemed to abrupt. More details especially on her old master would've been nice. Also more in depth details about master/slave collaring ceremony would've been nice. Like I said before, it's a shame you aren't still posting. Eventually I am going to run out of your stories to read.
Instead of giving them the story they deserve you did a rushed half ass job of it. Plus on a side note why get comments if you get pissy at the slightest bit of negativity? Don't worry honey plenty of people will stop reading your stories. Lol.
You clearly don't like taking on constructive criticism but I'm doing it anyway. I find it difficult to read you're style of writing, it feels like it's written in point form almost, no emotion just factual points. I don't like that she went through years of being bashed yet she was supposedly turned into a pain slut over night that is now cured of feeling any pain at all. Stupid. I also think you ruined the ending, you had this build up of something happening making out the whole story he didn't want her and was training her for a new master and you literally had them married in one random rushed epilogue. Such a shame and waste of what could have been an ok reading experience.