All Comments on 'Lila'

by roland26

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MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Am a near hopeless romantic, loved this well crafted piece. Erotically beautiful romance between two believably real young women. The swimming pool scene so easily visualized. Thanks for sharing.5⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done and illuminating. This is either based on personal experience or some impressive research. Excellent job of explaining her thoughts and feelings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

utterly fascinating!

MigbirdMigbird6 months ago
Romantically Erotic

Just reread and not sure why I did not comment the first time. No matter, so captivated by this piece — all of your pieces. Shannon and Lila so well developed as characters; and their moments together sexual and otherwise so real, so erotic — easily visualized. As a near hopeless romantic loved the ending. Hope you see this post and hope you continue to share. So very talented.

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