All Comments on 'Lillith's Stopwatch Ch. 01'

Lots of potential, and I think it'll be fun to see where this goes. Time-Stop stories can be quite interesting.

I would be curious about the guys reaction to simply learning that magic, demons and all that are real. While he has a strong will, he's also just discovered the greatest discovery in human history... and that's got to be something he's curious about. Will there be other supernatural beings he meets? Other magic? Or is this going to simply be an excuse to boink and enslave hotties? Will he give subconscious demands to random women, and then we get to see how that changes their lives? Will we follow along in separate side stories as the women experience their changes?

Nice story. I remember a similar one several; years ago. Shame I can't remember the title.

Needs some minor spell checking, but overall nice. Hope there is more.

I usually don't go for time stop stories, but this got me curious. Hope to see more soon.

Interesting idea and a great start. I'm looking forward to (hint hint) more stories about Ben and the stopwatch

Excellent first offering. Different, a little quirky, a pleasant change for the normal submissions.

This one is going to be such a good time. Let’s see if we have the womens showers at a gymnasium scene of some sort. Then we have the stop time and hit up a bank for some cash scene. The of course there is the usual peep and grope the girl he always had a crush on. These are not exactly original but they can be fun nonetheless. I am hoping for breaking some new ground in this one.

fuck with some hotties!

Very good start! Looking forward to seeing where the series goes!

Great intro. I appreciate his sense of wrong and interest in moving the hell past it!

Confused pregnacy could have been good