by NauticalTwilight
Off to strong start. You're really, really good at writing the dominant but still affectionate type, and as a certified ass-man, good job with those descriptions too. Looking forward for more
Romance and femdom should not be mixed. It's better to choose one. I liked the dominant script. Five stars, thanks.
It's always disappointing to see an author starting new stories while others remain unfinished.
Your writing is incredible I’ve read all your work and it hits at the core of what I find lacking at the majority of the stories on here. The heart you weave in seamlessly with femdom Sph Cuckolding is very rare and something I hope to keep reading for a long time to come.
I enjoyed the juxtaposition between Lily's confident dominance in the bedroom as a sex robot and her emotional fragility looking at Squir-Liams' garden. It is wonderfully written and I would love to see Liam and Lily's relationship both grow within the bedroom and outside of it- Liam helping Lily explore what it means to be human.
You are a very, very talented writer. This is one of the first times I've wanted to continue reading after finishing the first story. The style is natural and the literary elements don't feel forced. Sublime!
Loved this story. Very well written: sexy, but also emotionally resonant Looking forward to more!
I don't know where you disappeared to but I hope you come back to finish this series and write many more. The way you mix genuine affection with these fetishes is unlike anything I've ever read, I'm such a fan.