All Comments on 'Lily of the Uncanny Valley Ch. 01'

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darthnader19darthnader199 months ago

Wow the was perfect !

sennodensennoden9 months ago

I really hope sex bots like these become reality soon lol

sennodensennoden9 months ago

Off to strong start. You're really, really good at writing the dominant but still affectionate type, and as a certified ass-man, good job with those descriptions too. Looking forward for more

kindzazakindzaza9 months ago

Romance and femdom should not be mixed. It's better to choose one. I liked the dominant script. Five stars, thanks.

HemmingswayHemmingsway9 months ago

It's always disappointing to see an author starting new stories while others remain unfinished.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking9 months ago

I have a soft spot for sweet and slightly sinister women.

AreradArerad9 months ago

Wow, that was super hot. Awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

wow, great stuff as always. can't wait for the next update

anon7734Eanon7734E9 months ago

Instant favorite. I love tall and strong girls I don't know why.

JamaisYariverJamaisYariver9 months ago

Great setup! Looking forward to the continuation.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Your writing is incredible I’ve read all your work and it hits at the core of what I find lacking at the majority of the stories on here. The heart you weave in seamlessly with femdom Sph Cuckolding is very rare and something I hope to keep reading for a long time to come.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I enjoyed the juxtaposition between Lily's confident dominance in the bedroom as a sex robot and her emotional fragility looking at Squir-Liams' garden. It is wonderfully written and I would love to see Liam and Lily's relationship both grow within the bedroom and outside of it- Liam helping Lily explore what it means to be human.

EroTsubaEroTsuba9 months ago

Amazing story. Really looking forward to how Lily develops

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

You are a very, very talented writer. This is one of the first times I've wanted to continue reading after finishing the first story. The style is natural and the literary elements don't feel forced. Sublime!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Luv it ... moreeee

tonykrane01tonykrane018 months ago

Love this story. Please write more !!!!!!

hloverhlover7 months ago

Loved this story. Very well written: sexy, but also emotionally resonant Looking forward to more!

geek_writergeek_writer6 months ago

Please follow this up, great start!

KodJak22KodJak224 months ago

Really nice start. Looking forward to the sequel.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I don't know where you disappeared to but I hope you come back to finish this series and write many more. The way you mix genuine affection with these fetishes is unlike anything I've ever read, I'm such a fan.

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