by Rascalpapillion
O.K. CLEVER AUTHOR ! You went from the SAN FRANCISCO ZOO to behind the BAR at a CHICAGO PARTY IN A MANSION ! My head is spinning ! What a set - up for this story in particular to continue ! I am loving the way you get your reader into what is going on with your characters. You must love PEOPLE. You have such an intense understanding of what turns those same PEOPLE on ! The ACTION behind the BAR was incredibly FUN ! I could feel his clock in my own mouth ! Following her to her bedroom for her own sex. Well, been there, done that. Ya, I see a big future for you with LITEROTICA READERS ! CONGRATS ! 5 STARS !