All Comments on 'Lisa and Mac Ch. 03'

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Horrible

Nice story about a husnad and wife, but i hate the parts that the husband can not have sex with his wife. it kind of kills the mood.

Please stay in one category. LW readers aren't likely to go back and read two BDSM chapters.

Unbelievablely hot, please continue writing. This is amazing. Ignore the others who hate the genre as a whole yet continue clicking on it.

Paul you are a fantastic writer of material I really enjoy, I am divorced , but my wife was a true submissive. I answered a ad on the now defunct craigslist site Male wishes to meet couples for same room adult spanking fun, I told My wife who had left me a year before, and was in the process of remarrying, was visiting my daughter and I mentioned the ad, knowing she liked to be disciplined, and asked her if she would be interested in meeting him, I could see by her response that see she was excited, so I replied to the ad, and explained to him, that I would like to be spanked and caned in front of my ex wife, he said that he would do it, and he asked if my wife

would be interested in trying some spanking, My wife had confided in me that her new love did not want to do anything like that to her, she said if I arranged it, she would visit a couple of weeks later, the male Master who came from Bromley visited us (what a day)he spanked, and caned us

both, he then ordered us both to suck, and lick his cock and balls, after a while with him being rock hard my wife was then told she was to be fucked and to get on the bed, I was told to leave the room, I asked if I could watch the proceedings his reply was no, you can listen at the door.

The whole scenario was mind blowing, and very erotic

He has visited us on four occasions now, and although my ex wife has remarried she still comes back for his visits.

On his last visit, he caned, and strapped us both quite hard( fantastically I was allowed to watch them having sex Wow!) she told me that she had to hide the marks for three days,

she managed this because luckily for the master and I, her new husband is not particularly fond of sex, and so he never saw the marks, but we will have to be more careful in the future,

she has hinted that a hard spanking will be okay, but the cane will have to be lighter so as not to leave any marks.

I know that this will be strange to some people, but these kind of scenarios, are such a turn on, and provide such excitement and enjoyment to the three of us, it is hard to explain, but whatever rocks your boat.

I love your stories, maybe you could publish a book of similar stories,

I have e-mailed you in the passed thanking you for your stories, ,and once again do so, you are gifted writer, with a wonderful imagination. and hope you will carry on writing these type of erotic stories

Alex

This is an arousing mix of BDSM and LW aspects that works very well for me. If someone is not into this, it might be quite disturbing, but why those readers make it to part 3 of a series that is clearly going in one direction only is a mystery to me. Yes, I thought that the end of part two was kind of a turnoff at first, too, but only because the exclusion of hubby came a bit too quick for my tastes. Everything built up so nice and slow and nasty, that this came as too much of a surprise.

As for the rest of the story so far: for those among us who share the fetishes involved it is executed perfectly well and has just the right amount of hints at something even darker. I am not sure, how harsh I can take it and if it will stop being arousing for me, but the sense of danger definitely brings me to the edge of my seat (and to some other edge as well). So please go on and explore the dark for us. Someone has to do it.

:-)

I would love to read more about the further adventures of this lovely couple and their strict master.

SUPERHOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations!!!! Please, go on soon!!!

a well written very enjoyable story more episodes asap please

Beautiful story!

1 Star

All the tired cuckold cliches

26thNCuck Disapproved

It could have been an incredibly erotic story but failed horribly, with one short phrase NO SAFE WORD, compounded by the contract stating that the “Dom” could introduce others to assist in training her. I mean I already had doubts but frankly fuck that wannabe Dom, absolute prick he definitely deserves to be on the receiving end of his own punishments.

As a piece of writing it’s pretty good, as in well written but it’s just this kind of bullshit that makes vanilla folks think we’re all freaks. I’m definitely out but if you decide to write something that follows SSC &/ RAK I’ll happily give it a go.

Tess (uk)

Writing was good, but there was a reference to a “Lucy” and on a couple of occasions using the word “to” rather than “too”. Get an editor, just a suggestion. Otherwise the story line is really Hot. Very enjoyable!