All Comments on 'Little Lorna 01: The Beginning'

Excellent story

Waiting for more chapters eagerly.

I enjoyed the story but it was spoiled by a lot of spelling mistakes. I suggest that you read the story out loud before submitting it - that way you should pick the errors.

This was a great story, I don't see many young woman BDSM stories on this platform, so this was new to me! I'm hoping for a sequel soon haha

Can't wait for more!!!! Please continue this story!

Glad I found this, not my usual category. Purely consensual, but when she gets pregnant, that will spell doom for the story and my imagination. Maybe you can do something about that...

I remember being young like Lorna or more. It wasnt the first 2 Mens that took my Virginitiy or the boys I got with after that was more my age but the Older Man I got with who son I dated for a bit but I always Crushed On His Dad. I let Him Dominate me in EVERY Way. I feeled just like Lorna with him. He was my Master my Dom and my Lover. There wasnt a Hole I wouldnt GIVE Up to Him ANY Where or Any Hole. I even let him Pimp me Out after a while so He knew I TOTALY BELONGED to Him. I JUST WANTED TO PLEASE Him.

My Man Now is alot like my First Master and the DOM Man that TOOK my Virginity. There ISNT ANY Hole He cant Have or Anything I wouldnt DO or Havent Done for Him or any Other Man He Had me Please.

Poorly written which makes the story clunky. The dialogue is weird. Many spelling and grammar errors. 2 stars.

It would be so much more proper for Lorna to beg her Master to make the decision about to go on the pill or be bred. It is not proper for a slave to make any decisions for herself.