by AliceInWonderland79
we'd love to know what else happened, Alice - after such a wonderful - albeit delayed - start... .
More Honey more hot action from the Hotel, make him never want to leave. If you are a good Heartbreaker it will be a night he will never forget and the lady waiting in his bed will be a very distant also ran, and he will never give her another thought, MORE MORE Take him place he has never been!!!!!!!! Bob H
You left his girlfriend home with his kids. She'll get pissed and take off and then the kids are home alone...not quite realistic...sorry.
Good start for a potentially great romance story. Hope you do continue it.
WOW that was soooo hot it has made me sooo wet and horny. I hope you write a part 2 or more as i just have to know more. Keep up the good work
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