All Comments on 'Little Miss Heartbreaker'

by AliceInWonderland79

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Of course

we'd love to know what else happened, Alice - after such a wonderful - albeit delayed - start... .

DrFerroDrFerroover 18 years ago
MORE BABY MORE!!!!!!!

More Honey more hot action from the Hotel, make him never want to leave. If you are a good Heartbreaker it will be a night he will never forget and the lady waiting in his bed will be a very distant also ran, and he will never give her another thought, MORE MORE Take him place he has never been!!!!!!!! Bob H

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not bad but

You left his girlfriend home with his kids. She'll get pissed and take off and then the kids are home alone...not quite realistic...sorry.

kydreamrkydreamrover 18 years ago
Heck yes, this sounds like a good start

Good start for a potentially great romance story. Hope you do continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!

WOW that was soooo hot it has made me sooo wet and horny. I hope you write a part 2 or more as i just have to know more. Keep up the good work

:)

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